Flash Fiction Friday #2


Welcome to Flash fiction Friday…The challenge is to write a flash fiction story based on a specific photo. 100 words no more, no less..This is my second week doing this and I hope you enjoy it..

Her heart beat out of control, while watching him slide on his jeans. He’d be going commando. There wasn’t enough time to look where she’d tossed his boxers. Shuffling through the disarrayed cushions strewn across the room she bit her lower lip, this is one of the best lunch fucks she’d ever done with him. “Oh baby I already can’t wait to do this again next week on my lunch break,” he said and retrieved his shirt. Quickly stealing a kiss he ran for the fire escape, just in time. The lock clicked and the door opened. Hubby was home.

Now make sure to check out my fellow authors who are also taking part in the challenge…

Muffy WIlson: http://MuffyWilson.blogspot.com

S. J. Maylee: http://SJMaylee.com

ER Pierce http://www.erpierce.com

Kendel Davi: http://kendeldavi.wordpress.com

Gemma Parkes: http://gemmaparkes.blogspot.com/

Cyril J. Michael: http://authorcyriljmichaels.blogspot.ca/

Venus Cahill: http://www.venusbookluvr.blogspot.ca

Leann Mitchell: http://www.leannmitchell.blogspot.com 

Christian Jensen: http://horrorwritingdaddy.blogspot.com

Benjamin Russell: http://incubuschronicles.blogspot.com/

Bonni Sansom: http://bonnisansom.blogspot.com/

Yvonne Nicolas: http://yvonnenicolas.wordpress.com/

Katie Harper: http://katieharperwrites.blogspot.com/

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Comments (23)

Christian JensenMay 4th, 2012 at 6:03 am

Wow, what a terribly naughty little hundred words. Married woman getting a quick piece of stud, a room covered in pillows from wild, crazy sex, and the hubby with his key in the lock. I wonder if she will find the boxers in time? It reminds me off all the times I was throwing on my jeans and diving out a window as hubby walked in thr front door. Ah, memories…
Brilliantly done love.


Savannah Chase Reply:

Christian, why thank you…She might just have to hide those boxers if she does….Well you naughty thang…I hope there was a fire escape when you had to dive out…At least you remembered to grab your clothes…LOL…Thank you for checking out my post…


Laura EnoMay 4th, 2012 at 7:08 am

Awesome! I’m left wondering who finds those boxers… 😉


Savannah ChaseMay 4th, 2012 at 7:28 am

Laura, thank you…hopefully it will not be the hubby…LOL


ERPMay 4th, 2012 at 8:24 am

Aw man, hope she finds his boxers.. but how will she explain the disheveled room?

Well written flash 🙂


Ann CoryMay 4th, 2012 at 8:31 am

Great flash fiction Savannah – that’s one heck of a pic, too! Very inspirational 🙂


eden bayleeMay 4th, 2012 at 10:13 am

SO naughty! Love it!
Great job, Savannah,


Kendel DaviMay 4th, 2012 at 10:50 am

This was great, Savannah. First the fun then the tension!


Muffy WilsonMay 4th, 2012 at 10:51 am

So fun! It has been forever since I knocked off alittle piece at lunch! Delightfully executed!:) xo


S. J. MayleeMay 4th, 2012 at 12:05 pm

Oh, that’s right the boxers. I got all wrapped up in your 100. Very thrilling. Excellent Flash!


Julia Rachel BarrettMay 4th, 2012 at 12:21 pm

It is a fun, naughty little moment – afternoon delight!


Savannah ChaseMay 4th, 2012 at 12:46 pm

ERP, oh there are fun ways…As long as she can hide those boxers she will be good.

Ann, thank you..This week I was inspired right away..No last minute…

Eden, thank you so very much…

Kendal, thank you so very much…

Muffy, Those lunchtimes quickies are a lot of fun..LOL

S.J, thank you so very much..I love how much you can do with 100 words.

Julia, those are the best moments…


ceciliaMay 4th, 2012 at 4:26 pm

wow… that was an awesomely naughty scene wrapped up in so few words. love it!


Savannah ChaseMay 4th, 2012 at 5:15 pm

Cecilia, thank you…I’m pretty happy with how it turned out…


VenusMay 4th, 2012 at 6:08 pm

Fabulous Flash! I’d love to hear her conversation with hubby that is about to take place.


VenusMay 4th, 2012 at 6:09 pm

Fabulous Flash!
I’d love to hear her conversation with hubby that is about to take place.


Savannah Chase Reply:

Venus, thank you so much…I’m so glad you like it…I might have to write a continuation of the scene.


AJ BestMay 4th, 2012 at 11:38 pm

That was very good. I’m voting that she threw the boxers on to run to the bathroom to clean up and they were talking and then he left.

Who does these memes? I’d like to try.


Leann MitchellMay 5th, 2012 at 2:24 am

Great flash! I hope hubby doesn’t find the boxers. That could wind up being an awkward situation.


Gemma ParkesMay 5th, 2012 at 3:44 am

Sexy, tense post! She looks like she’s panicking alright!


Savannah ChaseMay 5th, 2012 at 8:12 am

AJ, thank you for checking the flash out…I’m part of a group that someone invited me into on facebook..

Leann, thank you…Oh yes, it could be very awkward..But if he is a man who doesn’t pay attention to his clothes she might just convince him they are his..LOL

Gemma, thank you…Oh yes…Big time..


Bonni SansomMay 9th, 2012 at 12:55 pm

Uh oh, close call. Hope the lover didn’t leave anything behind. Great post!


Savannah ChaseMay 9th, 2012 at 2:08 pm

Bonni, thank you so much….Oh he did…


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