Flash Fiction Friday: #FFF #RT Precious Beauty

Welcome back to FFF also known as Flash Fiction Friday. I’ve been doing pretty well, and this is my 4th week. The whole point of FFF is to write a 100 word flash, no more no less.

Chad watched as she stirred from her sleep. Big green eyes looked up at him in amazement. Her warm little body wrapped in the safety of his hands, so precious, and so fragile. Her tiny pink lips parted letting out a gentle sigh before settling back into her peaceful sleep. His brother Ray watched over his shoulder in amazement. They just couldn’t get enough of the tiny miracle that came into their lives. For so long they’d wished and wanted a little sister and now their wish had finally come true. Every finger and every toe perfect and truly beautiful.

So now that you have read my FFF, hop on over to my fellow FFF authors and check out their take on the photo.

Bonni Sansom: http://bonnisansom.blogspot.com/

Muffy Wilson:  http://muffywilson.blogspot.com

S.J. Maylee: http://SJMaylee.com

Gemma parkes: http://gemmaparkes.blogspot.com/

Jp Archer http://jp-archer.blogspot.com

Naomi Shaw: http://midnightfantasieswithnaomishaw.blogspot.com

Kendel Davi: http://kendeldavi.wordpress.com

Venus Cahill: http://www.venusbookluvr.blogspot.ca/

Cyril J. Michael: http://authorcyriljmichaels.blogspot.ca

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Comments (19)

Delilah HuntMay 18th, 2012 at 4:43 am

So sweet! I love how well you capture those moments. And it seems like really good writing exercise too. Might have to give it a try sometime.


Larissa ReinhartMay 18th, 2012 at 7:27 am

Very sweet!


Mae ClairMay 18th, 2012 at 8:27 am

Loved this, Savannah. Beautifully done!


Ann CoryMay 18th, 2012 at 8:58 am

Very sweet and sentimental – nice job sweetie!!


Bonni SansomMay 18th, 2012 at 8:59 am

Well done Savannah! I never thought about going with brothers and sisters. Excellent post.


Muffy WilsonMay 18th, 2012 at 10:47 am

Oh< Savannah< such a sweet flash. I had two older brother's and I like to think they thought the same about me. But, you did an great job in this post. I love this line, "wrapped in the safety of his hands". So, touching and heartgelt. Lovely:) xo


NaomiMay 18th, 2012 at 10:59 am

So beautiful. Took me right back to when my daughter was born. Loved your flasher


Julia Rachel BarrettMay 18th, 2012 at 12:09 pm

Awwwwww! There is nothing as sweet as a guy with a baby!


Lisa WorrallMay 18th, 2012 at 12:11 pm

Awwww – now those are two big brothers a girl really needs 🙂


Kendel DaviMay 18th, 2012 at 1:30 pm

Very nice and emotionally filling. A little sister. Beautiful!


S. J. MayleeMay 18th, 2012 at 2:25 pm

simply precious, I can feel lovely warmth of love, well done


Shelley MunroMay 18th, 2012 at 4:08 pm

What a gorgeous photo – the combination of strength and vulnerability. Loved the story too. Well done.


VenusMay 18th, 2012 at 5:51 pm

Beautiful Flasher! Well done, I loved the emotion.


Gemma ParkesMay 18th, 2012 at 6:10 pm

Ah, that’s a lovely post, beautifully descriptive too!


Rosanna LeoMay 18th, 2012 at 6:31 pm

That’s sweet, Sav…and cute twins with that little baby!!


eden bayleeMay 18th, 2012 at 7:43 pm

Aw, you know that little girl will be spoiled and protected by her 2 brothers.


DeniseMay 20th, 2012 at 8:17 am

Aww, I love this flasher! So adorable. Great one Savannah


CJMMay 21st, 2012 at 10:07 am

Fantastic Flasher!


Savannah ChaseMay 21st, 2012 at 3:27 pm

Thank you all for your lovely feedback..I’m really loving doing this..It is so much fun..I get inspired so fast..


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