Welcome back to FFF also known as Flash Fiction Friday. I’ve been doing pretty well, and this is my 4th week. The whole point of FFF is to write a 100 word flash, no more no less.
Chad watched as she stirred from her sleep. Big green eyes looked up at him in amazement. Her warm little body wrapped in the safety of his hands, so precious, and so fragile. Her tiny pink lips parted letting out a gentle sigh before settling back into her peaceful sleep. His brother Ray watched over his shoulder in amazement. They just couldn’t get enough of the tiny miracle that came into their lives. For so long they’d wished and wanted a little sister and now their wish had finally come true. Every finger and every toe perfect and truly beautiful.
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So sweet! I love how well you capture those moments. And it seems like really good writing exercise too. Might have to give it a try sometime.
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Very sweet!
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Loved this, Savannah. Beautifully done!
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Very sweet and sentimental – nice job sweetie!!
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Well done Savannah! I never thought about going with brothers and sisters. Excellent post.
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Oh< Savannah< such a sweet flash. I had two older brother's and I like to think they thought the same about me. But, you did an great job in this post. I love this line, "wrapped in the safety of his hands". So, touching and heartgelt. Lovely:) xo
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So beautiful. Took me right back to when my daughter was born. Loved your flasher
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Awwwwww! There is nothing as sweet as a guy with a baby!
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Awwww – now those are two big brothers a girl really needs 🙂
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Savannah,
Very nice and emotionally filling. A little sister. Beautiful!
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simply precious, I can feel lovely warmth of love, well done
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What a gorgeous photo – the combination of strength and vulnerability. Loved the story too. Well done.
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Beautiful Flasher! Well done, I loved the emotion.
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Ah, that’s a lovely post, beautifully descriptive too!
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That’s sweet, Sav…and cute twins with that little baby!!
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Aw, you know that little girl will be spoiled and protected by her 2 brothers.
eden
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Aww, I love this flasher! So adorable. Great one Savannah
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Fantastic Flasher!
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Thank you all for your lovely feedback..I’m really loving doing this..It is so much fun..I get inspired so fast..
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