#FFF Flash Fiction Friday: Meet Me At Midnight

Welcome to Flash Fiction Friday…The point of the game is to write a flash fic that is inspired by a photo. The trick is to make it only 100 words. No more , no less.
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The night breeze brushed against my tingling skin. I don’t know what I was doing here. Not a single soul could be found tonight on the boardwalk. The place is eerily quiet. He told me to meet him at midnight, at this exact place. Did he know we would be alone? A shiver ran down my spine like the cold hand of danger warning me to run, but I can’t. Stepping from the shadow I see him standing in the distance leaning against the post. I tremble with fear and excitement for what awaits me in just a few steps.

Now stop by and check out these lovely authors who are taking part in the #FFF with me..

Benjamin Russell: http://incubuschronicles.blogspot.com/

Patricia Logan http://naughtypassions.blogspot.com/?zx=d735233d541ad690

S. J. Maylee: http://SJMaylee.com

Muffy WIlson:  http://muffywilson.blogspot.com

ER Pierce: http://www.erpierce.com

Kendel Davi: http://kendeldavi.wordpress.com

Sherri Hayes: http://sherri-hayes.blogspot.com/

Gemma Parkes: http://gemmaparkes.blogspot.com/

Cassandre Dayne: http://cassandredayne.wordpress.com/

Sherry Palmer: http://michellechatton.blogspot.ca/

CyrilJ. Michael: http://authorcyriljmichaels.blogspot.ca/

Venus Cahill: http://www.venusbookluvr.blogspot.ca/

Bonni Sansom: http://bonnisansom.blogspot.com/

Leann Mitchell: http://leannmitchell.blogspot.com/

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Comments (37)

Shelley MunroMay 25th, 2012 at 5:33 am

Ooh! I wonder who she’s meeting. Nice flash.

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Ciara KnightMay 25th, 2012 at 6:19 am

Nice flash! I’m intrigued and want to know who she is meeting!

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Savannah ChaseMay 25th, 2012 at 7:28 am

Shelley, thank you…I might end up making this longer or even a story out of it..I’m feeling inspired.

Ciara, thank you…I have been thinking..I know who she meets but I might just write more…

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S. J. MayleeMay 25th, 2012 at 9:19 am

So nice and rich!! I got lost in her. Super moment, Savannah!! I want so much more.

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pk hrezoMay 25th, 2012 at 9:35 am

That worked nicely. And what a great pic too!! 🙂

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Muffy WilsonMay 25th, 2012 at 10:44 am

Oh boy………I felt the tingle too. I can see him, full of himself, leaning against the lamppost, smoking…waiting, waiting for HER to make the move to HIM. What’s in store for her? A great ride, I hope, after that build up. Great Flash:) xo

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Savannah ChaseMay 25th, 2012 at 10:57 am

S.J, thank you..I was inspired very late last night…I hope to add more to this…

PK, thank you so very much..

Muffy, omg, in the first version I wrote he was smoking…You read my mind.. I will be writing more of this in the current work…

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Cassandre DayneMay 25th, 2012 at 10:57 am

Oh that is very beautiful you know how I like a hint of danger in my sexual meetings. Purrfect

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Cassandre, thank you so much..Oh this will be a perfect scene…I’ve got it all on my head planned out..I can’t wait…

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FierceMay 25th, 2012 at 12:04 pm

Nicely done =)

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Julia Rachel BarrettMay 25th, 2012 at 12:33 pm

I look forward to your flash fiction, Savannah. It’s always right on!

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RobinMay 25th, 2012 at 12:43 pm

where do I send my 100 word FFF?

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Leann MitchellMay 25th, 2012 at 2:42 pm

That was spooky. Is he going to hurt her? Did she make a mistake by meeting him? The possible outcomes are endless. Nice FFF.

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Leann, oh you will be surprised with what will happen. This will be a full scene in my new book I’m currently working on..Thank you for checking it out..

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eden bayleeMay 25th, 2012 at 3:18 pm

wow! Ace flash, Savannah, great mood and setup.

eden.

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Savannah ChaseMay 25th, 2012 at 3:21 pm

Julia, thank you so much…That means a lot..

Robin, there is a facebook page..I’ve posted to ask about how people join up..

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Delilah HuntMay 25th, 2012 at 4:15 pm

Excellent. I love your imagery. You write 1st person really well.

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Savannah ChaseMay 25th, 2012 at 5:06 pm

Delilah, thank you so much..I have only ever written one story in first person..

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Rosanna LeoMay 25th, 2012 at 5:35 pm

Great stuff, Savannah!

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Savannah ChaseMay 25th, 2012 at 5:37 pm

Rosanna, thank you so much..

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BrindaMay 25th, 2012 at 5:53 pm

Very impressive! I was surprised at the first person also. You sure made it work.

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Brinda, thank you…I rarely write in first person…This was fun..

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Kendel DaviMay 25th, 2012 at 6:02 pm

Savannah, this was wonderful! You really brought that image home by using the details of her physicality to bring us in.

Great Flash!

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Kendel, thank you so much..I truly love doing these flashes. I have so little but love how in the end it all works..

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ERPMay 25th, 2012 at 6:02 pm

Danger and excitement. A new relationship…or something far more sinister. Awesome post Savannah 🙂

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Savannah Chase Reply:

ERP, thank you so very much..You will all be able to read the rest once I’m done the next project..I got so inspired with this photo.

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Gemma ParkesMay 25th, 2012 at 6:05 pm

Nice flash, l write a large chunk of my stories in the first person, it helps me get into the characters head and you have certainly done that here!

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Gemma, I’ve always wanted to do more but people have always said not to. I really want to get back into it.

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VenusMay 25th, 2012 at 6:31 pm

Fantastic Flasher. I love her mingled desire and fear. And I want to know who he is!

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Savannah ChaseMay 25th, 2012 at 6:37 pm

Venus, thank you so much…I have left you all guessing…

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Kim FaulksMay 26th, 2012 at 12:00 pm

Run!!!! forgive me Savannah, I get so carried away. I loved it, very suspenseful.

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Kim, it is ok..I can’t wait to share the rest. You might be surprised at what happens.

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Sherry PalmerMay 27th, 2012 at 11:15 pm

I loved this and your words completely drew me in. I could feel her anticipation as if it were my own. I want to know more…and more. I would have met him too, hell you only live once…might as well take the chance. 🙂

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Sherry, thank you so much…Oh I think once everyone knows more about him they will be drawn in..

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Bonni SansomMay 28th, 2012 at 11:23 am

Bummer!!! You left me hanging… I want to know more. Great flash!

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Savannah ChaseMay 28th, 2012 at 12:46 pm

Bonnie, I’m so good at that…LOL…Thank you for checking it out..

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Shyla ColtMay 28th, 2012 at 8:47 pm

Wow, loved this one. There are so many different directions you could take it I was dying to read more.

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