Welcome to Flash Fiction Friday…The point of the game is to write a flash fic that is inspired by a photo. The trick is to make it only 100 words. No more , no less.
The night breeze brushed against my tingling skin. I don’t know what I was doing here. Not a single soul could be found tonight on the boardwalk. The place is eerily quiet. He told me to meet him at midnight, at this exact place. Did he know we would be alone? A shiver ran down my spine like the cold hand of danger warning me to run, but I can’t. Stepping from the shadow I see him standing in the distance leaning against the post. I tremble with fear and excitement for what awaits me in just a few steps.
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Ooh! I wonder who she’s meeting. Nice flash.
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Nice flash! I’m intrigued and want to know who she is meeting!
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Shelley, thank you…I might end up making this longer or even a story out of it..I’m feeling inspired.
Ciara, thank you…I have been thinking..I know who she meets but I might just write more…
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So nice and rich!! I got lost in her. Super moment, Savannah!! I want so much more.
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That worked nicely. And what a great pic too!! 🙂
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Oh boy………I felt the tingle too. I can see him, full of himself, leaning against the lamppost, smoking…waiting, waiting for HER to make the move to HIM. What’s in store for her? A great ride, I hope, after that build up. Great Flash:) xo
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S.J, thank you..I was inspired very late last night…I hope to add more to this…
PK, thank you so very much..
Muffy, omg, in the first version I wrote he was smoking…You read my mind.. I will be writing more of this in the current work…
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Oh that is very beautiful you know how I like a hint of danger in my sexual meetings. Purrfect
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Savannah Chase Reply:
May 25th, 2012 at 11:00 am
Cassandre, thank you so much..Oh this will be a perfect scene…I’ve got it all on my head planned out..I can’t wait…
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Nicely done =)
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I look forward to your flash fiction, Savannah. It’s always right on!
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where do I send my 100 word FFF?
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That was spooky. Is he going to hurt her? Did she make a mistake by meeting him? The possible outcomes are endless. Nice FFF.
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Savannah Chase Reply:
May 25th, 2012 at 3:43 pm
Leann, oh you will be surprised with what will happen. This will be a full scene in my new book I’m currently working on..Thank you for checking it out..
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wow! Ace flash, Savannah, great mood and setup.
eden.
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Julia, thank you so much…That means a lot..
Robin, there is a facebook page..I’ve posted to ask about how people join up..
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Excellent. I love your imagery. You write 1st person really well.
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Delilah, thank you so much..I have only ever written one story in first person..
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Great stuff, Savannah!
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Rosanna, thank you so much..
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Very impressive! I was surprised at the first person also. You sure made it work.
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Savannah Chase Reply:
May 25th, 2012 at 6:12 pm
Brinda, thank you…I rarely write in first person…This was fun..
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Savannah, this was wonderful! You really brought that image home by using the details of her physicality to bring us in.
Great Flash!
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Savannah Chase Reply:
May 25th, 2012 at 6:14 pm
Kendel, thank you so much..I truly love doing these flashes. I have so little but love how in the end it all works..
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Danger and excitement. A new relationship…or something far more sinister. Awesome post Savannah 🙂
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Savannah Chase Reply:
May 25th, 2012 at 6:14 pm
ERP, thank you so very much..You will all be able to read the rest once I’m done the next project..I got so inspired with this photo.
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Nice flash, l write a large chunk of my stories in the first person, it helps me get into the characters head and you have certainly done that here!
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Savannah Chase Reply:
May 25th, 2012 at 6:15 pm
Gemma, I’ve always wanted to do more but people have always said not to. I really want to get back into it.
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Fantastic Flasher. I love her mingled desire and fear. And I want to know who he is!
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Venus, thank you so much…I have left you all guessing…
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Run!!!! forgive me Savannah, I get so carried away. I loved it, very suspenseful.
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Savannah Chase Reply:
May 26th, 2012 at 8:32 pm
Kim, it is ok..I can’t wait to share the rest. You might be surprised at what happens.
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I loved this and your words completely drew me in. I could feel her anticipation as if it were my own. I want to know more…and more. I would have met him too, hell you only live once…might as well take the chance. 🙂
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Savannah Chase Reply:
May 27th, 2012 at 11:18 pm
Sherry, thank you so much…Oh I think once everyone knows more about him they will be drawn in..
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Bummer!!! You left me hanging… I want to know more. Great flash!
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Bonnie, I’m so good at that…LOL…Thank you for checking it out..
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Wow, loved this one. There are so many different directions you could take it I was dying to read more.
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