Don’t you just love Friday? So you know with the end of the week it means Flash Fiction Friday is back. Yeah baby..LOL
Rules are the same as always, 100 words no more no less to write a flash to a photo. I love the photo that was chose this week. It got my imagination going.
FFF: His Command
She stood naked in the middle of the brightly lit room. Emotions exposed to his powerful eyes. No way to hide from what she felt.
“Lie down on your stomach on the table. Spread your legs and hold yourself up,” he commanded her. His gaze revealed nothing but the power he held inside him.
Crawling onto the wooden table her aching breasts scraped against the grain of the surface when she slid closer to the edge. Closing her eyes, she slowly spread her legs apart; her body trembled with excitement when the coolness of the room caressed her wet core.
Now go check out these other very talented authors who will be giving you their own flash take on the photo.
Venus Cahill: http://www.venusbookluvr.blogspot.com
S.J. Maylee: http://SJMaylee.com
Cyril J. Michael: http://authorcyriljmichaels.blogspot.com
Leann Mitchell: http://leannmitchell.blogspot.com
Yvonne Nicolas: http://yvonnenicolas.wordpress.com/
Kendel Davi: http://kendeldavi.wordpress.com
Veronica Fredricks http://authorveronicafredricks.blogspot.com
Gemma Parkes: http://gemmaparkes.blogspot.com/
Sherri Hayes: http://sherri-hayes.blogspot.com/
Angelica Dawson: http://angelicadawson.blogspot.com
Wow, she’s limber 🙂
Another great flash, Savannah.
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Shelley, thank you..Oh yes she is…That is skill.
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Very hot FFF, Is this a little taste of future stories of BDSM to come from you? If so its very hot!!
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Savannah Chase Reply:
June 15th, 2012 at 12:39 pm
Denise, thank you so much.. Yes it is a little, but what I have planned is even hotter..thank you for taking the time to stop over.
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Yoga…
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Savannah Chase Reply:
June 15th, 2012 at 1:22 pm
Julia, it might be..but that is not what they have in mind..LOL
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Ooh, this was nice, Savannah. So much erotic detail in such few words. Great Flash!
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Savannah Chase Reply:
June 15th, 2012 at 1:21 pm
Kendel, thank you so much. I hope to write more of this soon.
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Hot, sexy and sensual, loved it!
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Gemma, thank you so much..I really enjoyed writing it.
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dang only 100, I want the very next 100!! You captured a tense and sexual moment here. Well done.
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S.J, there will be more in a book I’m working on..Thank you so much..
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Love the detail you describe! Looking forward if this is going to be a new book idea. Fantastic FFF!!
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Savannah Chase Reply:
June 15th, 2012 at 11:28 pm
CJM, thank you so much. I can’t wait to show the story this will be in..Thank you for taking the time to stop by.
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Fantastic Flasher! Always a pleasure to read your writing.
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Savannah Chase Reply:
June 15th, 2012 at 11:33 pm
Venus,thank you so much. That is so kind of you. It means a lot. I truly love to share my work.
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Oh you big tease! I want more!
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Savannah Chase Reply:
June 15th, 2012 at 11:58 pm
Veronica, it is a pleasure to tease…LOL..I can’t wait to share more of this type of writing. The fact you want more only makes me more happy to write.
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Tantelizing Flasher! I loved your take on the picture. Very well done!
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Savannah Chase Reply:
June 16th, 2012 at 12:12 am
Leann, thank you so much for taking the time to stop by and check it out. I’m so thrilled you like it.
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Love the detail. Your writing is always such a pleasure to read.
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Savannah Chase Reply:
June 16th, 2012 at 12:14 am
Ciara, thank you so much. It means a lot. I love to share and the fact that people enjoy it.
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Nice! Really enjoyed your flash.
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Savannah Chase Reply:
June 16th, 2012 at 12:15 am
Nara, thank you so much.
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Great snippet Savannah!
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Savannah Chase Reply:
June 16th, 2012 at 12:16 am
Hildie, thank you…
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You are really good with flash fic. When I look at the pic, I keep staring at that tattoo. Wow. I laughed at Shelley’s comment.
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Savannah Chase Reply:
June 16th, 2012 at 12:20 pm
Brinda, thank you so much. Yes the tattoo is just amazing…I got inspired by the pic and just loved it.
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Ace, hon.
eden
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Savannah Chase Reply:
June 16th, 2012 at 12:23 pm
Eden, thank you so much…
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Nice tease. She is caught in anticipation as are we!
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Savannah Chase Reply:
June 16th, 2012 at 12:25 pm
Angelica, I love to tease. Ohh the anticipation will be well worth it.
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Yowza. Now that’s a thought provoking pose. lol
Nice flash fiction piece. 🙂
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PK, thank you so much. It is a pose that gets you thinking for sure.
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“Sir, she is a beautiful specimen isn’t she? Are you happy now that we’ve brought her into our lives?” Said a throaty woman’s voice from somewhere behind her.
Her breath hitched in her throat. Anticipation and fear made a nest in her lower belly. It wasn’t unusual for her Mistress to be present when he used her, but she wasn’t expecting Mistress Hayley to join them tonight. She shifted her hips and the cool wood massaged her clit. Her desire to serve him, to please her Mistress and her Sir coiled inside her. The walls of her pussy contracted in hunger at the thought of what they might have planned for her tonight.
He chuckled. “Yes, I’m very pleased with our little Pussycat Doll. She has been the perfect addition to our home. I was a little worried at first that she would be difficult to turn into an acceptable submissive. She has a stubborn streak and she can be quite bratty at times, but you have done wonders training her.”
“Thank you Sir,” said Mistress Hayley. “She has been a willing pupil and I have enjoyed teaching her how to please a woman and to service your needs.”
“Well, let’s see just how well she has learned the lessons you’ve tried to teach her, go get my paddle.”
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Benjamin, wow…You just lit up a bigger fire into the photo. My 100 words were just the start and you made it your own. Very sexy, seductive and vivid. Reading it you can picture it all unfold. Amazing job..Thank you so much.
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Mistress Hayley watched in quiet anticipation as the Sir, her Sir and now the lovely Pussycat Doll’s Sir squirmed over his lap. Licking her lips she crossed and recrossed her legs as she pressed down the thin silk of her scarlet dress. Her Sir loved that she kept on her sultry clothes especially when savoring the lusciousness of such a delectable treat such as the lovely girl who lifted her head the moment Sir cracked the paddle.
Crack!
“Ooohhhh!” Baby girl screeched.
“quiet! You know you deserve punishment!” Mistress Harley smiled to herself. She’d felt the effect of the Sir’s paddle on many occasions and tonight, simply seeing the already reddening cheeks of the precious Baby Girl she’d tasted more than once sent a thrill through her. “Mmm… Not too hard, Sir as of yet.”
Lifting his head, Sir smiled in quiet reverence and gave her a tsking finger. Mistress Hayley knew her place and yet she enjoyed stretching her boundaries, seeing just how far he’d go with the tempting Pussy Cat.
“You both need to behave tonight or you won’t be allowed any of my cream,” Sir said quietly as his eyes twinkled.
Somehow Mistress Hayley knew better. He was going to have both women service and pleasure him tonight. This was the perfect home, the prefect threesome. This was exactly where both women craved being. And he was their Sir…
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She clenched her jaw as the sting of the paddle against her already sensitive skin sent shock waves of pain and in turn blossomed into pleasure. Every part of her firing off while her trembling body trying to grasp for control. She tried to hide from their sight, conceal her emotions in her eyes but she couldn’t. Not when Mistress Hayley’s gaze seared into her. The threat from Sir, exciting her and yet putting her in her place.
“But Sir, I’ve been good,” Baby girl said breathlessly.
Sir’s hand brushed against her reddened bottom, caressing the place where mere moments before the paddle had left its mark.
Smack!
This time his powerful hand struck her ass.
Baby girl threw hear head back, closed her eyes while sucking in a deep sharp breath. Every part of her trying to absorb the tingling sensation from the contact of Sir’s palm against her now over stimulated flesh.
Her mind raced telling her to stay quiet, to behave. She needed to make them proud. Show them all their hard work and training was not wasted time.
“If you had been good I wouldn’t have had to punish you,” he said to her.
Baby girl opened her eyes and turned her head towards him. His gaze strayed from her direction and focused on the task of punishing her.
She knew she would have to work harder to please her Sir and Mistress. Show them she deserved her place in their loving home. They’d taught her well and she would bring them pleasure and everything else that they desired.
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Damn Damn Damn Savannah, pls tell me that (comment above) part of the book lol very hot! I actually think I felt it 😮
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Savannah Chase Reply:
June 20th, 2012 at 9:48 am
Denise, thank you so much..I’m so thrilled you enjoyed it. I loved writing it. I was challenged by two amazing authors.
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Super sexy post. This shows her submissiveness.
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Savannah Chase Reply:
June 24th, 2012 at 10:21 pm
Yvonne, thank you so much. I loved writing this. There is a longer version of this at
https://www.facebook.com/notes/savannah-chases-fan-page/his-command-continued/468052439889785
or
https://www.facebook.com/notes/savannah-chase/his-command-continued/450666111619624
It was created with 2 additional authors.
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