#FFF Flash Fiction Friday: To Please You

Flash Fiction Friday is here and this time I have something special for you along with my 100 word flash. Make sure you look under the 100 word flasher for the special treat.

For anyone new to FFF, the rules are write a 100 word flash to a photo. No more, no less than 100.


To Please You by Savannah Chase 

She watched as he made his way towards her. His gaze was locked in her direction. When he grabbed hold of her hair he pushed her head back before his fingers took her mouth. His movement was hurried, filled with impatience. “I’ve waited to do this all day,” he told her before he claimed her lips with desperate hunger. Their breath entwined as he thrust his tongue inside her. Tasting, teasing, and taking her breath away. He sated the hunger she’d fought to control without him.

Her body melted against his, and she surrendered herself to get lost in his commanding hold.

So now for the surprise..I’ve started to really get into longer flashes and more in the BDSM genre. I really got inspired by the photo and had to write this. Hope you like it.

To Please You by Savannah Chase

Copyright 2012 SC

“Don’t disappoint me,” he warned before leaving the room.

The sound of his heels clicking against the wooden floor fade as he draws farther, and within seconds she can no longer hear him.

Pain shot through her knees as the ache intensified in her limbs. Her muscles protested and the stinging burn continued to build. No longer is she sure of the length of time she’s been doing this. Every part of her was trembling with excitement because of the task at hand he’d given her. Never had she kneeled for Sir this long. She’d done just as he’d asked without any hesitation. This was another test to see how far she would go. Obey his command without going against it.

Her resistance bubbled to the surface, she wanted to stand up and tell him she couldn’t do it, this was too much to take, but her mind continued to challenge her, and push her to stop to remain motionless.

“Sir all I want to do is please you,” she whispered quietly to herself.

Her heart, her body, her soul wanted this, to give up herself to him without a single question. To relinquish full control to the man who’d stolen every part of her.

Focusing her eyes on the floor she listened for his movement. She couldn’t see him but she knew he was there watching from afar, testing her just as he’d done many times before.

Breathing  slowly in and out she kept her eyes down. Looking back wasn’t an option. It would disappoint him that she’d done so, and that’s the last thing she ever wanted to do. His refusal to fuck her last night still weighed down on her heart. Not even begging had been enough. He’d made up his mind and this was her punishment and test, her way to redeem herself.

Images of him as he ran his powerful hands over her heated body flashed in her mind causing her skin to tingle with need and anticipation. Last night was gone and today she would do better.

The familiar ache built between her thighs. All she could do was keep her fingers fanned out at her sides in an attempt to restrain herself from reaching down towards her wet pussy. Only a few swipes against her sensitive bud was all she needed to feel the sweet bliss of ecstasy.

Hearing his footsteps in the room turned her attention away from the deep seething need she couldn’t help feeling for release. Sir had to be proud of her. She’d done so well.

“Get on all fours,” he commanded her, removing all emotion from his voice.

She reached out and bent down letting her tired body rest on her hands. The gentle shift of her thighs rubbing against each other intensified her ache which only grew stronger.  Lowering her head down, she took a deep breath at the relief of pressure from kneeling.

“You’ve done so well, my pet,” he said to her. He steps close in behind her.

Hearing him say that makes her smile, and her heart leaps with joy.

Sir rests his hand on the small of her back before he slides it up her spine; it only makes her wetter with hunger. Oh, how she’d missed his touch.

For a brief moment his hand stops before he takes it past her ass, his touch causing a feverish burn deep down inside. A subtle moan escapes her when he parts her lips and begins to stroke her wet folds. Unhurried fingers circle her clit bringing her shivers.

“Oh Sir,” she breathlessly calls to him.

“You like that my pet. That feels good. Doesn’t it?”

“Yes, so good, she replied.

When he slipped one finger and then another inside her she threw her head back while her inner walls clenched around him. Her body urged her to move her hips, to thrust and to claim her much needed release.

“Stay still, I don’t want you to move,” he tells her.

Her body complied and she steadies herself in place. His fingers slide in and out, at first so slow, savoring the moment before he plunges them deeper and thrusts faster and faster.

The tingling feeling builds, like a volcano, coming closer to the surface. She knows she won’t last much longer as he quickens his pace.


“Yes my pet?”

“Please let me cum.”

“Not yet,” he replied to her.

His fingers feverishly continue to fuck her, to milk her body. Her breathing is heavy and her mind races, emotions and feelings overtake her while every bit of her tries to control the stimulation overload. The edge is near and she can’t hold on anymore. Every thrust pushes her closer and closer. She knows she must hold on, and can’t let go. Not until he tells her to.

Her moans continue to fill the room; they are cries of impending pleasure and pleas for him to give her permission.

Sir pumps his fingers, taking everything from her which she gives away. Her body hungers for him. Such an insatiable thirst like never before.

Her teeth graze across her quivering lip before she gently bites down on it.

It’s too much. She can’t hold back.

“Please,” she begs him and turns around meeting his gaze.

He needs to let her cum. She’d been good, and has obeyed him tonight.

“What do you want?” he asks her and plunges inside her once more. The shock against her sensitive pussy engulfs her.

“I want to…oh Sir,” she cries out. Her mind is lost in all the sensation. She must tell him.

“Sir I want to cum for you,” she utters breathlessly.

He shifts his body, his fingers still buried deep inside, bends lower towards her. His heated breath bathes her flesh.

“You may cum my pet,” he whispered.

With those words she lets the fiery bliss claim her from head to toe. Taking her, draining her body of any last bit of energy left. Her panting grows stronger as her walls tighten around him.

“Sir, yes…yes,” she barely manages to utter.

When he slips out of her she can no longer hold herself up. His fingers grasp tightly at her hair and with his other hand he takes hold of her mouth. Mere seconds pass before he claims her lips. Their breath entwines as he pushes his tongue inside her.

Her body melts against him, and she surrenders herself to get lost in his commanding hold.

Now go check out the other sexy authors who are taking on this weeks picture.

Julez S Morbius: http://morbiussworld.blogspot.co.uk/
Sherri Hayes: http://sherri-hayes.blogspot.com/
Bonni Sansom: http://bonnisansom.blogspot.com/
Naomi Shaw: http://midnightfantasieswithnaomishaw.blogspot.com/
Yvonne Nicolas: http://yvonnenicolas.wordpress.com/
Davee Jones: http://finless.blogspot.com/
S. J. Maylee: http://SJMaylee.com
Venus Cahill: http://www.venusbookluvr.blogspot.com
Leann Mitchell http://www.leannmitchell.blogspot.com
AuroraRose Andromeda http://rollingmuseintheroses.blogspot.com
Veronica Fredricks: http://authorveronicafredricks.blogspot.com
Patricia Loganhttp://naughtypassions.blogspot.com/
Cyril J. Michael: http://authorcyriljmichaels.blogspot.com

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Comments (29)

NaomiJune 29th, 2012 at 7:43 am

I loved your flasher. So sensual, yet with the element of control. I found myself getting lost in this story Good one 🙂


Savannah Chase Reply:

Naomi, thank you so very much. It is something that was inspired by such a great photo. I can’t wait to do more.


Cora BluJune 29th, 2012 at 8:54 am

You never fail to thrill me, Savannah.
Very nice.


Savannah Chase Reply:

Cora, thank you so much. You are so amazing and always support my work. Thank you truly.


Leann MitchellJune 29th, 2012 at 9:07 am

Great Flasher and story. You described every detail perfectly.


Savannah Chase Reply:

Leann, thank you so much. Glad you liked it.


eden bayleeJune 29th, 2012 at 9:09 am

Like this direction, Savannah. I think this is a great genre for you,

Great story.



Savannah Chase Reply:

Eden, thank you so much. It means so much coming from you. I can’t thank you.


Gina L. MaxwellJune 29th, 2012 at 9:16 am

I loved the story, Savannah! I like that he was called Sir instead of the typical Master, which is a little much for me. I really like reading BDSM stories (real ones, not that 50 Shades Shit) because I find the dynamics of the relationships so intriguing. To an outsider it appears as though it’s all about arrogance and pain, but it’s exactly the opposite. It’s all about pleasure, on both sides, and power–whether they’re wielding it or giving it up, it’s what that individual craves. I hope you keep exploring this genre and give us more. You’ve got at least one guaranteed reader right here!


Savannah Chase Reply:

Gina, thank you so very much. You are right, when people don’t know what BDSM is really about they have a blurred vision of what it is. You can count on me doing more BDSM. Hope to have a book soon. Thank you for your amazing comment and support. You truly made me thrilled and happy that I shared this.


Angelica DawsonJune 29th, 2012 at 9:23 am

Lovely flash and the longer piece is excellent.


Savannah Chase Reply:

Angelica, thank you so much. Thrilled you liked them both.


Mirriam SmythJune 29th, 2012 at 9:52 am

Beautiful. Both pieces were amazing to read. Her emotions just rolled from through the words I felt as if I were there watching her.


Savannah Chase Reply:

Mirriam, thank you so very much. I always love when a reader connects with what I write. Thank you so much. I truly mean it.


Julia Rachel BarrettJune 29th, 2012 at 12:24 pm

Oooh, nice long story! More!


Savannah Chase Reply:

Julia, thank you so much..Hope to have more soon.


AJ BestJune 29th, 2012 at 5:02 pm

This pleased me, and hopefully tonight it will please my man!


Julez S MorbiusJune 30th, 2012 at 3:48 am

Both pieces were excellently crafted and I do like the way you expanded the picture for a longer flash


VenusJune 30th, 2012 at 7:45 am

Fabulous Flash and your longer piece is dynamite! I love how you’ve been inspired and thanks for sharing.


CJMJune 30th, 2012 at 8:35 am

Well written pieces. Fantastic FFF!


S. J. MayleeJune 30th, 2012 at 9:13 am

Standing ovation, so very cool. I loved the flash and then the deeper emotion and hotness of the 2nd piece was breath taking. Well done.


Savannah ChaseJune 30th, 2012 at 9:42 am

AJ, well that is just sexy..Hope last night was a good one with your man.. 😉

Julez, thank you so very much..I’m so glad you liked them.

Venus,I thank you..I will be doing the longer ones more often now..I love them.

S.J, you are so amazing. Thank you so much. I’m truly thrilled you like them both esp the longer one.


Savannah ChaseJune 30th, 2012 at 9:43 am

CJM, thank you so much..I appreciate it.


Veronica FredricksJune 30th, 2012 at 3:59 pm

Fabulous post. I love that you were so inspired by the picture.


Savannah ChaseJuly 1st, 2012 at 10:44 am

Veronica, thank you so much…I loved it too..


Kiru TayeJuly 1st, 2012 at 11:18 am

Wow. I enjoyed reading this, Savannah.


Trinity BlacioJuly 1st, 2012 at 11:29 am

Wow, I’m impressed my friend. Great job, I wanted more!


Bonni SansomJuly 1st, 2012 at 12:53 pm

Loved this, Savannah. You really drew me in with the whole story and I believe you would be really great in this genre.


Savannah ChaseJuly 1st, 2012 at 3:43 pm

Kiru, thank you so very much..

Trinity, thank you. Means a lot coming from you. There shall be more soon.

Bonnie, thank you. I’m going to be publishing a lot more in the genre. This is just a tease.


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