Flash Fiction: Mistress


Mistress by Savannah Chase

Copyright 2012 Savannah Chase

All eyes were on Mistress as she made her way through the club in my direction. She paid no attention to anyone around her.

She’d set her sights on me. Her eyes filled with fire and need.

With every step of her long luscious legs, her hips swayed seductively, knocking men off their bar stools as they stared. Her presence radiated power, control,demanded attention, and obedience. Fantasizing, as they tried to hide the visible bulge in their pants.

Looking at her Mistress, her heart skipped a beat. They could all look, but not one would ever touch. She was the one who’d won her heart.

When she stopped in front of me, she lingered for a moment. Her full pouty crimson red lips brushed against mine sending fire through me. I wanted to reach out and touch her but I held back and hooked my finger into the back of my dress.

“You’ve been a good girl tonight,” she said and captured my lips.

Parting my lips I welcomed her inside me. Her tongue swiped against mine. Our breaths colliding with need. With insatiable passion.

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Comments (15)

Julia Rachel BarrettJuly 4th, 2012 at 12:08 pm

Not my usual genre, but very very nice!


Jasmine HaynesJuly 4th, 2012 at 12:10 pm

Very hot excerpt!


Savannah ChaseJuly 4th, 2012 at 12:29 pm

Julia, thank you for taking the time to read it even though it is not your usual genre. I am thrilled you like it.


Rosanna LeoJuly 4th, 2012 at 1:16 pm

Hot as usual Savannah!


Savannah ChaseJuly 4th, 2012 at 2:51 pm

Jasmine, thank you so much. I can’t wait to share more of this.

Rosanna, thank you..I’m really thrilled you like it.


Shyla ColtJuly 4th, 2012 at 4:14 pm

Hawwwt! :fans her face: You created a great visual.


Savannah ChaseJuly 4th, 2012 at 4:21 pm

Shyla, thank you so very much. I have been loving posting these flashers.


Ciara KnightJuly 4th, 2012 at 6:48 pm

Not a genre I tend to read, but I loved your writing. You definitely have a way of manipulating words to ooze sensuality.


BrindaJuly 4th, 2012 at 8:01 pm

Your writing is always as Ciara said, “oozing sensuality” and perfect with the photo prompt.


Shelley MunroJuly 5th, 2012 at 3:56 am

Great photo and your flash goes so well with it. Very nice!


Savannah ChaseJuly 5th, 2012 at 9:36 am

Ciara, thank you so much. That means a lot coming from you.

Brinda, thank you..You guys are making me smile. I’m really thrilled you like it.

Shelley, thank you so very much.


Lisa FoxJuly 5th, 2012 at 9:47 am

Oh my – that’s HOT!


Savannah ChaseJuly 5th, 2012 at 10:00 am

Lisa, thank you so very much. 😉


eden bayleeJuly 6th, 2012 at 12:11 am

Sexy, hon.


Savannah ChaseJuly 6th, 2012 at 11:28 am

Eden, thank you so much.


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