#FFF Flash Fiction Friday: May I by Savannah Chase

#FFF Flash Fiction Friday: 100 words no more no less to write a story prompted by a picture.

Aug 3 2012 FF pic

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May I by Savannah Chase

His hand swept up her thigh as he held onto her. Kneeling he gazed down to the floor.
“Look at me,” she commanded.

He didn’t budge, he disobeyed her.

Reaching for his hair she grasped a handful and pushed his head back.

“When I tell you to do something I expect you to follow,” she said and finally their eyes met.

“I’m sorry Mistress, I don’t deserve to be able to look at you,” he replied.

A saddened sigh escaped him.

“No you don’t, but I want to know why?”

“I broke the rules, and fell in love with you.”

Check out what the following amazing group of writers came up with, for this picture. 100 words to describe the picture, no more, no less and these wonderful authors do it so well.  Please click on their names and show them some love by commenting on their version of the picture.

Julez S Morbius: http://morbiussworld.blogspot.co.uk/

Naomi Shaw: www.authornaomishaw.com

Venus Cahill: http://www.venusbookluvr.blogspot.com

S. J. Maylee: http://SJMaylee.com

Muffy Wilson:  http://muffywilson.blogspot.com

Gemma Parkes: http://gemmaparkes.blogspot.com/

Veronica Fredricks: http://authorveronicafredricks.blogspot.com

Bonni Sansom: http://bonnisansom.blogspot.com/

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Comments (36)

NaomiAugust 3rd, 2012 at 7:46 am

Will he have to be punished for falling in love? I want to know more of the story. Great flasher

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Naomi, thank you so much. She is very stern but she might be a surprise.

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Laura EnoAugust 3rd, 2012 at 8:10 am

Great twist on that!

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Laura, thank you so much.

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Kali MaddoxAugust 3rd, 2012 at 8:28 am

I wonder how receptive she will be to his declaration of love! If she is a hardened Mistress who is living this type of life for the control and pleasure only she might not approve of the intrusion into her emotional distance. There is such a difference between BDSM and a D/s lifestyle. I’m not sure how much of a role love plays into BDSM, if that is what she is solely after.
But, I digress. It is your amazing story to tell. My imagination just leaps off the deep end when I read such an open-ended and interesting FF post! Thanks, Savannah 🙂

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Kali, I love how your imagination leaps off. It is wonderful. There is so much to BDSM and D/S. It is a journey for both people and so much ties into it. I look forward to continuing this teaser in the future.

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Ciara KnightAugust 3rd, 2012 at 11:08 am

I liked the twist. There is so much told in so few words. Great job.

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Ciara, thank you. I really got into this one at the last minute. It just hit me.

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Gemma ParkesAugust 3rd, 2012 at 11:17 am

Aw, sweet! I hope she takes pity on his sweet soul, great post.

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Gemma, she is a very complex woman..Thank you..

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Julia Rachel BarrettAugust 3rd, 2012 at 1:00 pm

Really good, Savannah. I do love the ending – I’d like to read more.

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Julia, thank you..I hope to have something soon..

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Danita MinnisAugust 3rd, 2012 at 1:11 pm

I say it’s time for a nice, thorough whipping. 🙂

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Danita, well look at you..We will just have to see..

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ceciliaAugust 3rd, 2012 at 1:20 pm

Oh I can see this one turning into a yummy read. now that he has fallen inlove with her, what will she do? Oooh, great conflict. Certainly wasn’t expecting the flash to head that direction. Nicely done!

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Cecilia, I do agree with you. There is so much going on. Love is not an easy thing. Thank you so much for checking it out.

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S. J. MayleeAugust 3rd, 2012 at 5:11 pm

You left us on an emotional cliff hanger, Savannah!! You’re naughty 😉 and I wasn’t expecting it. I had to re-read it now that know how he feels, very cool

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Savannah Chase Reply:

S.J, I can’t help it. She is just that kind of a Mistress. She surprised me.

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Venus CahillAugust 3rd, 2012 at 5:19 pm

Fantastic FFF! Love that last line.

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Venus, thank you..That was unexpected even for me.

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Rosanna LeoAugust 3rd, 2012 at 6:47 pm

Is that really against the rules??? No way!!!

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Rosanna, no it is not, but she is very complex.

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Tigris EdenAugust 3rd, 2012 at 9:05 pm

Finally got home to comment! Great Flash!

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Tigris, thank you..So thrilled you came by and enjoyed it.

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Julez S MorbiusAugust 4th, 2012 at 5:56 am

Love comes at the most inconvenient time sometimes Great FFF

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Muffy WilsonAugust 4th, 2012 at 9:17 am

Wonderful twist……….will she or won’t she allow him that indescretion? Or perhaps punish his willfulness? Pray, do tell:) xo

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Muffy, there are so many options. I know she will surprise even me.

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CJMAugust 4th, 2012 at 4:15 pm

Fantastic Flasher!

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Bleuame6@gmail.comAugust 4th, 2012 at 6:01 pm

Really enjoyed this flash :o)

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Savannah ChaseAugust 4th, 2012 at 6:30 pm

CJM, thank you.

Blueame6, thank you..So glad you did..

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Dianne HartsockAugust 5th, 2012 at 12:25 am

Oh, a very tender and sad moment. Wonder how she’ll answer him?

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Savannah ChaseAugust 5th, 2012 at 10:47 am

Dianne, yes in a way it is. She is a very complex woman that even surprises me.

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Veronica FredricksAugust 5th, 2012 at 11:55 am

Fantastic post.

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Veronica, thank you so much.

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Bonni SansomAugust 7th, 2012 at 7:24 pm

Loved your flash. What will she say?

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Bonnie, thank you..She has not made up her mind yet..

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