#TT #RT Tantalizing Tuesday: Promises

Every Tuesday, several talented writers are known to gather. They each choose a picture that inspires them and write a two hundred word teaser to tantalize, titillate and tease. This is where we post some of the pictures and name the writers, to get your taste buds going.Make Tuesday your favourite day of the week. Look forward to your Tantalizing Tuesday Teaser!

Aug 14, 2012 TT Flasher, 123rtf
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Copyright (c) Promises by Savannah Chase

“I can’t even stand to look at you,” she said and wept into her hands.

Every tear which careened down her cheek was another knife being driven deep within her breaking heart. He had nothing to say, no explanation of why he’d done it all.

“You can’t even say sorry. For all the promises you made me. How much you loved me,” she said sobbing, desperately, trying to catch her breath.

Her tear stained eyes shot in his direction. No emotion, no regret, nothing on his face to tell her he wanted her forgiveness. All he could do is sit there looking out towards the window of the empty apartment.

She’d come by this morning to check on the progress of the painters and that’s when she’d found them together. He’d been kissing her they way he’d always done with her, full of hunger and uninhibited passion. Need and desire.

She heard him sigh heavily. “I never wanted for this to happen. We just connected. Something amazing and undeniable.”

“You couldn’t just break up with me? You had to do it. Right before our wedding.”

“It’s over,” he told her and left her to cry in her deep suffocating pain.

 

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Now check out these other talented authors who are ready to tantalize you. 

Naomi Shaw: www.authornaomishaw.com

Jake Malden: http://jakemalden.blogspot.com/

Muffy Wilson:  http://muffywilson.blogspot.com

Lee Brazil: http://leebrazilauthor.blogspot.com

Julez S Morbius: http://morbiussworld.blogspot.co.uk/

Pablo Michaels http://www.pmmanmanromance.weebly.com/

Havan Fellows http://havanshawthaven.blogspot.com

Cg Brumby http://cgbrumby.blogspot.com.au

Dianne Hartsock http://diannehartsock.wordpress.com/my-blog/

S. J. Maylee: http://SJMaylee.com

Ray Sostre: http://theafterdarkworld.blogspot.com

Don Abdul: http://don-abdul.blogspot.com/ 

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Comments (48)

Shelley MunroAugust 14th, 2012 at 3:39 am

What a mean man.

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Shelley, yes he is..He does not deserve her..

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dianne hartsockAugust 14th, 2012 at 11:17 am

What a jerk. She’s so better off without him! Wow, Savannah, great writing. I’m actually mad at him. 🙂

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Dianne, you can say that again. Thank you so much. I’m peeved myself. Jerk to the max.

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Lee BrazilAugust 14th, 2012 at 11:44 am

Oh , yeah! Great work, Savannah! And yes, she’s definitely better off-

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Lee, thank you very much. She is..she deserves better.

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Julia Rachel BarrettAugust 14th, 2012 at 12:13 pm

Great read, as usual, Savannah – I like that you chose to go dark!

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Julia, thank you as always. I was inspired the moment I saw the photo.

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krissyAugust 14th, 2012 at 1:31 pm

damn .. i couldn’t really read this cause it reminded me of a conversation i have had in my past… you seriously know how to tug at those real deep emotions…

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Krissy, I’m sorry..I love to change it up with the flashers. Show different sides. Thank you for checking it out.

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Anita KingsberryAugust 14th, 2012 at 1:38 pm

I liked it…would love to read more of this story.

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Anita, thank you so very much…

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Mary QuastAugust 14th, 2012 at 1:48 pm

What a fun idea! Love the story.

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Mary, thank you..Something a little different than the norm..

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Pablo MichaelsAugust 14th, 2012 at 2:35 pm

Soooooo. sad. The guy is a shit. I hope she recovers and doesn’t take him back. True romance!

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Pablo, yeah he is..He doesn’t deserve a woman like her. She is strong..She needs time..

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S. J. MayleeAugust 14th, 2012 at 4:58 pm

Oh, ouch. I’m happy for her, she didn’t marry the jerk. I’m with Dianne, I’m mad at him too. Frickin FABulous writing, Savannah.

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Savannah Chase Reply:

S.J, better to find out now than after it is official. Thank you so much…

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NaomiAugust 14th, 2012 at 5:06 pm

What an idiot! She’s worth far better

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Naomi, yes she is…and he does not deserve her at all.

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Rosanna LeoAugust 14th, 2012 at 6:00 pm

Ouch.

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Rosanna, big time…

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Ciara KnightAugust 14th, 2012 at 6:41 pm

That man is a… Well, I’m too much of a lady to say it.

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Ciara, you are a lady and yes he is…

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eden bayleeAugust 14th, 2012 at 7:29 pm

Ouch – you pulled a lot out of that pic, great job, Savannah!
eden

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Eden, thank you..I saw the pic and knew exactly what story to do with it.

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Delilah HuntAugust 15th, 2012 at 1:52 am

Ooh so deep and yet sad. You always get those emotions right when it comes to the photos. Thanks for those lovely words.

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Delilah, thank you so much. I truly appreciate your support.

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Julez S MorbiusAugust 15th, 2012 at 7:58 am

Heartbreaking but excellently written.

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Julez, thank you so very much.

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Hildie McQueenAugust 15th, 2012 at 9:59 am

Good writing, wow he’s either a jerk, or had a good reason to dump her. Love it!

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Hildie, thank you so much. Jerk is mildly put…

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ceciliaAugust 15th, 2012 at 11:38 am

Ouch. That’s so mean. You captured that moment so well. So heartbreaking.

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Cecilia, thank you..Yeah it is a hard scene to write and even read.

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Ranae RoseAugust 15th, 2012 at 4:46 pm

I guess it’s true – a picture is worth a thousand words.

And that guy…what a jerk!

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Ranae, thank you…this pic was worth so much more.

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Benjamin RussellAugust 15th, 2012 at 6:00 pm

Well, sometimes the heart and the brain aren’t always in sync. Yep, sometimes a man’s little head, the one between his legs, does all the thinking. Truthfully, even though it was painful for her, think how bad it would have been for her to find out he didn’t love her – after the wedding. Well Done Ms. Savannah – well done indeed.

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Benjamin, you are right. They don’t. She was better off to find out now and not after they were married and passed that threshold. She is so better off without him. Thank you so much for checking it out.

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Cg BrumbyAugust 15th, 2012 at 11:38 pm

Heartbreaking. At least she found out before she married him that he was a cheater. Still does not make the pain go away. You captured the scene and image beautifully.

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Cg, thank you so very much. I think we all agree better now than later. She will find the one for her, he is so not it.

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ERPAugust 16th, 2012 at 7:40 am

Wow, he is so cold. That is some sociopathic behavior right there. (Hmm, I think I’ve been watching too much Dexter lol)

Well done Savannah.

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Savannah Chase Reply:

ERP, cold is mildly put. I think you might be right. But I think he is self involved and just cold. I think I might have to start watching Dexter..LOL

Thank you for checking it out…I appreciate it.

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HavanAugust 16th, 2012 at 11:18 pm

Well…his new ‘love’ will have the same lesson to learn – if he cheated to be with her what makes her think he won’t cheat to be with someone else…and right before his wedding? But the woman isn’t alone – there are great men out there and she’ll find the one that treats her like a princess…at least that is where my mind is taking her story…<3

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Havan, yes she will learn the hard way. You are right, there are great men out there who cherish and love with everything. You are right, she will find someone.

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Ray SostreAugust 17th, 2012 at 12:24 am

Wow! Deeply cold of him, but what a great piece Savannah. Great work.

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Ray, thank you so much. Yes, he is horrible and just does not even deserve her.

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Jake MaldenAugust 17th, 2012 at 4:45 am

Raw emotion, capturing the picture very well indeed – her pain and his self-preoccupation. Very well done.

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Jake, thank you so very much. This time the picture went into a sad place and something more emotional.

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