Erotic Poetry: Tremble by Savannah Chase

Tremble by Savannah Chase
Copyright 2012

His hands slowly glide against my skin
Fingers slide the rope, making it tighter and tighter
My heart is racing
My lips are parched

I feel the fire stirring inside me
I’m to be yours
Now and forever
I will surrender to you
My heart, my soul
The deepest part of me

Your eyes hold me as you watch in silence
The warmth of your hand unravels me
I tremble in fear that brings me pleasure
To know that I belong to you

I moan in ecstasy as I watch you work
Push my hands behind my back
Let the rope slide and slither as you hold me back
I am to be still
I am to be yours

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Comments (12)

Julia Rachel BarrettSeptember 21st, 2012 at 12:08 pm

Oh wow, Savannah – you have a very evocative way with words.

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Julia, thank you…I always wonder if my words will have the same impact when others read them.

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S. J. MayleeSeptember 21st, 2012 at 8:52 pm

So beautiful, Savannah.

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Savannah Chase Reply:

S.J, thank you so much…

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Ciara KnightSeptember 22nd, 2012 at 1:50 pm

That is beautiful, Savannah. The tension and artistry is amazing.

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Ciara, thank you..I remember writing this and the words just flowed with emotions.

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Delilah HuntSeptember 24th, 2012 at 9:47 am

OMG. I can’t believe you wrote that (well yeah I can) It’s beautiful, Savannah. I can actually see the scene playing right before me.

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Delilah, thank you so much. When I wrote this I saw it unfold in front of me like a little movie.

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eden bayleeSeptember 24th, 2012 at 1:50 pm

Lovely, Savannah – you need to write more poetry, for sure

eden

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Eden, thank you so much. I plan on doing some more for sure…

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Lisa FoxSeptember 25th, 2012 at 2:32 pm

Wow! That is beautiful.

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Savannah Chase Reply:

Lisa, thank you so much. It means a lot to me.

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